life's a burdan
life's a dream
living in a world
thats yet to be seen.
nobody dies a virgin,
live screws us all.
why be affraid to be diffrent??
when in the end we all en up the same.
pushed back into reality,
god i love insanety,
falling inlove.....yet another fantacy
dying alone.....no problem just jump.
i scream at night,
and fear death not....
lifes a burdan
livings dream
yet still we scream for that,
wich remains un seen.
Please tell me what you think
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omg teehe I love this poem.it's very deep and I love how it flows.keep up the great work.
~~Ocean Dreams~~ a.k.a ~~Shirree~~
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Oooooooooooooooh, very deep honey. Let me guess, you were feeling a little... down when you wrote this? I actually really like it though. i love the secong stanza when you say "why be afraid to be different?
when in the end we all end up the same." That's just a cool little phrase.
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