what is heaven or hell.
i ask this beacause life
isent heaven but it isent
hell ether what i think
is once you die you are
you are reborn onec more
and you cep being reborn
and that formation ceps
going for etrnity.thats
what i think of heaven
and hell.
Please tell me what you think
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having been legally dead papers and all ..... but still standing here ..... I know about the so call afterlife and the here after I just know but that is me
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i disagree
i dont agree with you i think earth is hell and ones we die we eather go to hell which in my eyes is here your right on that part but if we die and go to heaven we never come back which is a good think this was a great poem you are a great poet keep on wrighting and remember have fun love your older sister Dianna
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i agree
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Your views are views shared by many, the thought of rebirth constantly either evolving or devolving depending on how you lived your life and the choices you made during each lifetime. it was fantastic.
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hmm this is an intrsting piece... but it needs a spell check
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thanks i thankfull
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I like the way you did NOT spell things exactly properly. It added something of a zing. I am intrigued by your piece. I look forward to reading more and seeing your grow in your writing abilities. Thank you for honoring us with a very interesting read.
Lady Blue~
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Welcome to AllPoetry
An interesting take on the cycle of man and our souls.
Your layout and spelling will make it very hard for many, but I have had a lot to do with friends and a daughter with dyslexia and thus have learnt to read around this type of spelling.
Glad to have you at AP and please drop any Greeter an IM if you need any assistance.
Let the ink flow and your fingers dance
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Hard to understand...
You must use spellcheck here Scorpion King, it is hard to read due to spelling errors. I will comment further after you use spellcheck.
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Sounds more like a wise person giving out advice or just speaking to young kids trying to make them wise... it is good and makes a lot of sense but the grammer no offense is bad... i didn't understand what you meant when you said ceps.... was it suppose to be keeps??? lol anyways this poem is good and like I said you are a good poet i guess it runs in your family unlike mine... good job hun
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