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Hush of Night

The hush of night sweeps over me,
I am alone -and in the dream.
Silence softly touches me,
Surrounds me, breathing tenderly.

Peace at night from all my fears,
I rest at last from haunting tears,
Whispers softly end the fears
As night begins to dream.

The whispers growing in the night-
Darkness murmurs -out of sight
Softly beating in my mind.
The night invades my dream.

Harshly flowing round about
Darkness screaming, lashing out
Hard to breathe and falling - down
Night grabs. Night pulls. Night screams.

Waking slowly from the fright
I look into to dismal night,
Everything is not quite right -
When will I end the dream?

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  • azure85 gold member
    January 27, 2007

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    Oh, you described night terror so well. When reality and sleep intertwine, you can hardly tell which is real. And which is not. Very good descriptions!