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The Journey..

~

The realm awaiting,

all too familiar

There, then here, again and again

Until a time

we conceive beauty

And hold apt, lives we have lived

~

Brilliance pierces

unsighted eyes

Clarity after the final release

A globe of somber

pain and love

The vessel buried beneath daisies

~ 

Light ribbons

of color and energy

Voyage of destiny, of fate, of fortune

Reincarnation of

lessons not cultured

A trembling vortex tunnels homeward

~  

Completing the circle,

looping

Destination no longer questioned

For all that was

is there once more

The journey of souls, continuing

~

 

 

Author notes

A look into Spirituality and life between lives

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Rockstar Bob
    February 9, 2007
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    Sounds like one of my dreams. Very cool


  • Morbid Rainbows
    February 5, 2007

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    The way you wrote this poem reminds me strongly of edgar allen poe's writing.


    It's very beautiful.


    Thank you for the comment, by the way


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    February 2, 2007

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    I can not concentrate to read...i will try to do this later.
    I want to wish you luck in this contest...


  • countrybabe gold member
    February 1, 2007

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    Wow

    Wow...this piece is great my friend. You always have such a wonderful way with words. Good luck to you in this contest.

    Keep writing

    Countrybabe


  • Partners In Crime
    January 30, 2007

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    This is well done... and the entire piece is poetic... well done... thanks for entering and Good luck


  • Kari gold member
    January 27, 2007

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    This was very sweet and touching. You've done a great job. The best of luck to you in the contest. I love the background.
    Kari

  • Warrior7
    January 27, 2007

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    excellent

    This is great Dove, the book does sound very interesting


  • catz Moderators member
    January 27, 2007

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    An intrigueing poem, Dove and so well written This book sounds very interesting and something I would read and enjoy.

    Good luck in the contest


    Dee


  • individuality gold member
    January 27, 2007

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    a soft and gentle piece here, nice and relaxing to read i wish that you have good luck in this contest you have entered. spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...


  • Huntress silver member
    January 27, 2007

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    I have a feeling when we die that we will wonder to ourselves why in the world did we wait so long Excellent poem Good luck in the contest

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