Keeper of the sacred sparkling fire, I welcome you
Into my heart inspiration and motivation to fill
As twenty candles burn tall and bright in orange hue
Creative ideas spring forth on this night chill.
Oh exalted one, far and wide Goddess of every poet
Divine Mother, young maiden and very wise crone
Listening to Celtic music as I wait for your touch
My thoughts align and intent becomes clear and hone.
On Tuesday in white shells I offer you drops of snow
Oh Goddess with transformative powers umpteen
Grateful for the blessings upon me you bestow
To connect with you, so fortunate have I been.
Leaving a white handkerchief on my table at night
With a prayer of thanks I request your inspiration
In the days that come as I visualise and hold it tight
You bless my specific need, my wish sees completion.
Counterpart to brave Archangel Michael's warrior energy
You put your foot down assertively, sticking to truth
In Kildare, Ireland millions pay respect in your temple
Oh 'Bride' whose passionate fiery flame does soothe.
Honouring you Imbolc is celebrated on February First
As daylight increases earth smiles in seedlings of spring
Your flame golden gives direction and quenches my thirst
Making creative ideas and ventures succeed effortlessly.
For all that You have blessed me with, I thank Thee
And I hear you whisper to me, "Sweet one, Blessed be"!
Author notes
AP Name : Lotus of Lakshmi
A contest entry
- Give me your prewrites!!!!! by Nereida Nightshade.
450 points, ended February 19, 2007, 101 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Excellent Write This is great. Thank you for taking the time to enter my contest I wish you the best of luck.
REDWINGSPIRIT
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Thank you very much, dear Spirit
Char
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I enjoyed this and learnt at the same time. A wonderful entry that made me think and certainly worth the silver
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A lovely piece of poetry that was also very informative for me. You certainly are knowledgable in regards to Celtic mythology, and have combined that knowledge with a fine poetic craftsmanship to create a wonderful hymn of homage. Best of luck in my contest, and thanks for entering.
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a good spiritual piece of poetry you have penned here, the rhythm and flow are nice and steady. thank you for sharing.
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Thank you, Individuality
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Well Done
If this is anything to go on I am sure your fresh write is going to blow my mind...
It was simply a beautiful piece of poetry...I really enjoyed it...
Thank you so much for entering my contest and I wish you the best of luck
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Thank you so much, Tessa
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Brigid is one of my favorite goddessess... You wrote about her with grace and beauty. Your words made her seem even more amazing than I believed could be possible. Good Job.
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Thank you so much, Poetryistherapy
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Thank you for your contest submission as well as for following the rules. I adore mythology and I adore all things celtic. Strangely, I coud have sworn I had read this piece before, but do not see a comment by me so, major de ja vue it must be. Well done write, MM & BB! Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors. Hetohke'e *
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Such powerful words, reaching out to be heard outloud...nicely written..good luck with the contest
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Thank you, Prudence
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Amazing I love it!
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Thank you, Rockgirl
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Wonderful. This is brilliant. Well said. Keep up the great writing.
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Exalting in it's beauty and power...She is the muse and Creation's refuge...Brigid the Mother
Just so Inspiring, Blue
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Wonderful Poem !!!
Wow, A wonderful read and beautiful imagery with your story/poem. A pleasure to read. Take care, Sandy
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Thanks a million, Sandy
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Thanks a million, Sandy
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Beautifully done. Reminds me of many pieces I've read on rituals and the Goddess. It has a soothing effect that is most lovely. Great job on this.
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Thank you Young Poet
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great
I really enjoyed reading this poem, it was so well crafted, and deserved more that a bronze trophy, it touchs all who read it, great job, John
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Thanks a billion, John
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Sorry, that web address is www.solasbhride.ie in case you ever eant to look it up.
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Thank you for the link, visited it, great, lovely. Thank you
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do you really believe any 'goddess' would inspire the word 'umpteen' to force a rhyme??
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Brilliant.
You might like to check out www.solasbhride.com . Its the webpage of 2 Brigidine sisters who live in Co Kildare. Ireland. The live by the ways of Brigid and forever trying to promote her love and understanding. Am s glad to have cam across this piece. Really well thought out and insightful.
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Perhaps watch the flow a tab bit. nice...
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Christ. If that won the bronze...
Once again, very well done! Pagan poetry is always so much nicer to read than other religious poems I think. Mainly because paganism in general is so much more intense and intimate. You have chosen your dieties wisely it appears, and I do hope that you continue to put out this kind of marvelous work.
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Thank you, Kinetic
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nice work on this
great work on this poem i say i l iked it
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Thank you very much, Sunshine
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AWESOME!!!
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Thank you, Rangaette1993
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WOWZAS!
this almost seems as if it could be an invocation to Brigid...a very ritualistic invocation but an invocation none the less. amazing write!
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Thank you, Silveren
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one word, WOW!
"And I hear you whisper to me, "Sweet one, Blessed be"!"
that line right there says it all. I admit, my opinion as well is also a bit biased, but, OH WOW! I have seen hundreds of pagans attempt writing about our belief, and none have so charmingly succeeded. Dear Poet, you are indeed gifted by the Goddess with the Silver tongue of a bard. If all of your poetry is half as good as this, I stand in awe of a Master wordsmith. saying great write is putting mildly.
Blessed Be,
Lord Merlynn.
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Dear Lord Merlynn,
Thank you for such nice words. I have been smiling ever since I read your comments
Charishma
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Though this is not what I believe, I have to agree this is a well written piece and you are a talented poet. I wish you light.. and joy and understanding. Blessings. Debby
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Thanks a million, Debby
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As daylight increases earth smiles in seedlings of spring
Your flame golden gives direction and quenches my thirst
very descritive you write so honest
In Kildare, Ireland millions pay respect in your temple
Oh 'Bride' whose passionate fiery flame does soothe
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Thank you, Grace
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"My thoughts align and intent becomes clear and hone." Your poem intent is definitely clear and honed! Wait, should I be writing that "clear and hone," like in your poem? You probably have that right, you're the writer after all? My favorite god is Thor.
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Ah, so you like the God of Thunder! That's great! Have you written any poems about him yet?
I'm glad you liked mine
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alright, I'm a pagan, and therefore biased in favor of poetry about the Goddess, but this is really good! Apparently your supplication of Brigid was answered: this is an inspired write. Well done, and Blessed Be.
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Merry meet, Lazarus,
Thank you for liking my poem so much. I'm so pleased
Blessed Be and Merry Part,
Charishma
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Thank you, Lazarus
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Thank you, Lazarus
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Such a wonderful write about one of the most important figures in Celtic Mythology. The flow and the wording of the piece are incredible- no question. You've done and absolutely fantastic job with this.
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Thanks so much, Virginia
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Thank you, Virgina
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A very nice tribute to St Bridget. Well done and good luck in the contest. Val
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Thanks so much, Val
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awesome
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wow, you really captured the essence of the festival and the nature of the Lady Brigid in this, and very elegantly so! Blessed be!
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beautiful write. The thoughts flow down the page smoothly and with eloquence.
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Thank you, bear
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quite nice; it really captures the modern appeal of this ancient goddess.
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Thanks so much days!
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I think I've read this before, but I quite enjoyed my return visit! Still think this is a lovely write.
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Thank you for coming back
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sometimes when you practicalise deitic poems they can seem corny.
you've blended a wonderful amount of praise and practicality quite well it becomes a small, poetic view on a large, global force!
well done,
nite wrting!
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Thanks so much for the wonderful feedback, Pink!
Char
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This invokes the power of the survivor. Poetic eloquence at its finest. It flows with wisdom, excellence, perfection, and high intelligence.
Bravo!
Marianne
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Thank you so much, dearest Marianne!
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Thank you so much, dearest Marianne!
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What a great write about a religion that is one that I hold near and dear to my heart. This past holiday was incredible... This was an awe-inspiring poem. I love it. You held true to the values of what Brigid stands for. Good Job.
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Thanks so much, Saxy
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you did a remarkable job with this subject and format, although there is obviously one aspect you might want to address, and that is the consistency of your rhyme scheme. I can't think of any good alternatives off the top of my head, but i bet you can figure something out.
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Thanks GuideVirgil.
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I long to visit Kildare - that thin place between now and eternity. If you'll excuse my ignorance, I don't understand the concept of a Goddess, but I know the myths of St. Bride, St. Patrick, St. Columba (Columcille) (I know them as Saints...) and savour the truths held within their stories. This is a beautiful prayer (if that word is not gouche!)
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Hi Anamchara, Brigid is the Celtic Goddess of poetry, smithcraft, inspiration and medicine. I have it written in several books. She is a Saint too as you say. Most Saints in different cultures are given the respect of God. For example, in our Hindu culture, we regard a Saint named Sai Baba as God...more like, an 'avatar' or incarnation of God.
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Aside from a lot of forced rhymes, this was quite good, you really painted a picture.
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Thanks Hurricanes
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Not matter the version of the goddess we worship she is always glad to hear our voice. It matters little our mode of worship so long as we pay tribute to those deserving. If you could clarify something for me about the number 20 I thought that the number 3 and it's multiples as well as 5 and the number 7 were sacred I did not know about 20. What signifigance does 20 hold? May you walk in light always.
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20 candles answer...
Hi Sensual! Your question is most welcome. Here is the answer:
"In the days when Celtic Paganism was the main religion of Ireland, 19 priestesses tended the flame of the Goddess Brigid. They rotated, one each day, and it is said, on the 20th day, the Goddess herself tended the flame. This evolved into an early Christian tradition whereby nuns in the abbey she founded were considered guardians of the "Fire of St. Brigid". After her death, its said the fire burned continuously and took a great deal of wood, but the ashes did not increase - until the church outlawed the practice. The Sisters of St. Brigid order continue to tend "the eternal spiritual fire of St. Brigit", and members of a worldwide organisation called Ord Brighideach continue to maintain the 20 day rotation schedule, keeping :Brighid's flame" alive."
Hope this answers the question
This answer is from the book - A Goddess Is A Girl's Best Friend" by Laurie Sue Brockway.
Love and Blessings In Abundance,
Charishma
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thank you
Thank you for your timely poem on this important subject. If only more people were actively seeking this sort of inspiration from the higher powers that create and influence us all, I think the world would be a better and more respectful place. <>. I'm very glad to see a poem about la/ fheile brighid on this site, and to see something of the old litany style reflected in your poem.
Much gratitude from all of us at teaglach ui mheadhra.
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Thanks so much for the wonderful comments and points, UaMeadhra!
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WONDERFUL! That's all I have to say. =]
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Thanks a bunch, AllHallowsEve66!
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Oh a wonderful homage paid to the goddess Brigid. It is absolutely beautiful! Well done!
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Thank you so much, ROSE!
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Wow this is really moving. So beautiful and full of splender for the Celtic Goddess. I loved reading this poem for it's visual. Well done.
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Thanks a lot, Kiera!
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Beauty is beyond the words of "I thank thee"
A celtic poem of whispering beauty in the higher powers that guide us all.
Bravo!
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Thank you for such a nice feedback, BHolzner
Blessed Be!
Charishma
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Such a lovely homage you have paid to your Celtic icon! She is a most attentive presence, I gather, in your life. You have equated her with majesty and beauty. I especially loved the line: "As daylight increases earth smiles in seedlings of spring." Not everyone's ear is attuned to the whispers of a higher power; yours is! My best on a piece beautifully stated, ♥ Belle
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Dearest Belle,
My sweet sis, I am so touched and happy with your lovely feedback on my poem on Brigid. Thank you!!!
Lots of kisses on flowers pink,
Charishma
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Thank you so much for the lovely feedback, Blushing! I wrote this poem for Brigid on the eve of Imbolc. I love to learn about Goddesses, Gods, Mythology of various cultures. Currently, I am writing a poem on/for Odin. Hope you read that too once i am done with it.
Hugs,
Charishma
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You're very welcome. In fact I have been very interested in Odin as of late. He's kind of like that enigmatic hot older bachelor you know is way too old for you but...you just can't help being interested, lol. I've been wanting to do a pen and ink on him. I will definitely be on the lookout for your next one...
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I really like the intent of this poem, your word choice, and the sense of devotion you bring. However, you are so talented with your words, rhyming seems to hold you back. I think you could take this poem and create a masterpiece of freeverse... you are obviously so inspired by Brigid that you could write volumes.
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Hi Elizabeth, glad you like the poem. I am not too good a rhymer, you are right I should use rhymezone.com more
Thanks for reading.
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ach aye lassi spokin bless thy spirit is true, nought desire from shadowy fear as they would run to bite their tails at this, and so keen light in holy space ye hath provided mine eye drifts to the holy powered moon, as i will cast a gifted prair to your health I walk with a trinity of now, sending waves of mindship and smile to all belief of mother earths great peace, and so blessed ye magick be
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Hi Climbing! Wow, I love the language you speak in!! Thank you for your blessings.
Love,
Charishma
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This poem hooked with the first stanza and I liked it all the way to the end. Very nice piece of work with great imagery. Keep it up!
Em
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Thanks a million, Em!
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Symbolism in this creates a passionate piece of work, the emotion is clearly felt as you read, I do so adore Ireland for my best friend dwells there, so it took me back to a sweet memory.
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Hi Cannonsfire! It's great that my poem could remind you of your best friend. Be Blessed!
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Wow! Very nice! The imagery is just beautiful and the symbolism is passionate and elegant in itself. I feel as though I can see what you're describing. A poignant piece with nice rhymes. This poem is not typical as in, its rhyme tell of emotion--unlike many that tell of someone just trying to find a ryhme! Nice form and flow as is the opening and closing lines. The opening pulls readers into a beautiful image almost of fantasy and the end makes people give a sigh of joy. Wonderful.
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, Lace
Blessed Be!
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"Keeper of the sacred sparkling fire, I welcome you
Into my heart inspiration and motivation to fill
As twenty candles burn tall and bright in orange hue
Creative ideas spring forth on this night chill."
Wow. the opening stanza is just great. The first line is amazing in that. I really enjoyed the alliteration.
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Thanks for reading, Honesty I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Amazing thoughts
You bring all these varieties of subjects together to form a homage. Thanks for sharing. Jules.
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My Pleasure
Keep writing.
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