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Rainbows

When there is a dark, gloomy day,
Don't feel down.
If it's bucketing it down with rain,
Don't feel glum.
Because at the end of it all,
As the sun creeps from behind the clouds,
A rainbow will appear and
Lift your spirits once more.
Be optimistic and be excited when a storm comes,
Because at the end of it,
You know there will be a spectrum,
Of red, orange, yellow, blue, green, indigo and violet.
Look forward,
Be happy,
And let the glory come to you.

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  • fantasysmurf
    January 13, 2008

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    I LOVE storms

    Yes, I get excited when rainstorms come. The thunder, the lightning, the heavy downpour and yes, then the rainbow. Well done, Autumn Whisper.


  • Moon Fighter
    July 2, 2007
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    BRILL

    Hiya , long time no chat. Great poem keep up the great work.


  • Janetheplain
    June 9, 2007

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    YAY!!

    I love rainbows and rain. SO ya know I like storms either way! Awesome poem, Jane

    p.s. I have a poem called Rainbow Tears you should check out!!


  • 2lullabyhaven
    June 2, 2007

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    Wow

    I love how you placed this into prose. Inspirational
    insights by one so young, yes you've said more than a
    mouthful with this one, Keep penning, this is only
    your beginning. smile.


  • Melodies
    February 9, 2007

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    It's been awhile since I visited you!

    And I am delighted to read this wonderful poem... that I am carrying away to Poetry Planet! You told me once that I could wisk your poems away to the planet, so here I am! You will find your heavenly poem at blogcentral.thereporter.com/planet

    and we get between 500 and 800 hits a day, so many people around the world will admire your fine talent! Thank you very much!


  • Ruby Petal
    February 1, 2007
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    OMG!

    OMG RAINBOW!!! *stares* o_________________________O
    nice poem XD


  • lucy sky-diamond
    January 27, 2007

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    a very uplifting poem with alot of beauty within it. i like the message about rainbows, good luck in the contest, and keep up the great work

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    January 27, 2007

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    excellent

    Very nice Bradley. OPtimistic, touching and uplifting. Great to read something new of yours again; thanks very much for entering my contest. Best wishesa and good luck. Uncle Brian


  • xXGoddessofPainXx
    January 27, 2007

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    nice

    its a nice poem really lifts ur spirts when ur down.. Good work i love the picture its so pretty gets u feelin the rainbow in you.. Good job

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