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If You Could Only See...

Every time I watch the news I am angry at what I see
Senseless deaths and political crap that don't mean a thing to me
Homeless freezing with their child still alive in their arms kept warm by the mothers own clothes
drug dealers sentenced to 25 fixed while child molesters walk out in 3 because thats how it just goes
children missing and instead of searching authorities are talking with the press
Mother screaming wheres my baby her head is such a mess
kids walking into schools with guns and killing classmates right as they stand to say the pledge
women drowning their own babies in bath tubs and rivers claiming they are crazy and went off the edge
the President thinking he knows whats best as he sends our loved ones out to fight
maybe if his daughter was out there running for cover then maybe he would see the light
stock exchange jumps up and down honestly I really don't give a crap
celebrities are harassed and violated by those idiots who has to get the best snap
well once again the whether man is going to try and forecast the week
its amazing how much he really gets paid for being a guessing geek
hurricanes and tsunamis make it hard to plan a family vacation
you cant let your children walk to school anymore cause their letting rapists move next to  our schools while out being tested on probation
This stuff makes me angry and every bit of it is fact
I wonder if these judges and major administrations that have power to make a difference really care about this negative impact.

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  • Cupcrazy gold member
    March 23, 2007

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    Great write that tells it like it is. Loved the images and the messages conveyed. great write. Bunny


  • whatever666
    February 5, 2007

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    good point

    Excellent job on the poem, I'm not in favor of all the crap going on either so I quit watching the news, because even though they can't hear me I yell at the tv.


  • HisOneTrueLove6107
    February 4, 2007

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    Amen. It upsets me as well. Why must we be in battle? It's Bin Laden ans his band of ass's problem as well as our government. Not the whole nation of Iraq. I definitely agree with AmericanGirl2008. Use up as much of the first amendment that you can, before it's taken away. Keep up the great work and I hope you do well in the contest!!

    Much love, Ashleigh


  • Mel-the-Believer
    February 1, 2007

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    This was a very interesting write. I'll admit I don't agree with the whole entire thing, but there are parts where I do agree. I admire you for speaking your mind about how you feel. You're defenitely using your freedom of speech . One thing I will say, and this is not against you, it's just instead of bashing different people of the government, pray for them, pray that they'll know the right desisions to make. Thanks for writing this. Keep up the writing. God Bless!