Remember, I'm here
And I'll not fade.
Remember, I'm true
My heart will never lie.
Remember, I care
I'll not deceive you.
Remember, I'm real
And won't ever blame you.
Remember, I'm human
And as humans, we make mistakes.
Remember, I'm not perfect
But I'll think highly of you.
Even if it hurt
Even if I cried
Even if my love burnt
To cinders throughout the night.
I'll think highly of you.
Author notes
Some might know what this is about. Not too sure if I'm being obvious or not. Don't misread this though, please. And constructive & personal comments ARE appreciated
Please tell me what you think
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I'm fairly sure I know what this is about, but then again, I could be wrong.
Great write, sorry it's taken me ages to comment, haven't been on this site for aaggeess ever since myspace kicked off I kinda forgot all about it...oops. Anywho, yesss Feelings can be so gay.
Good job at getting it out though.
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You've stumped everyone, this was fantastic though, I really liked the simple repetition which gave it fullness and yeah.. Im being too analytical.. Sorry, anyway I enjoyed this.
Confusicus. -
Not exactly sure of what it means, so I won't make any assumptions, since that could lead to misreading it. I'm a bit "out of it" at the moment, so I'll make a better comment later.
- Nick
* Fear is your only God * -
I like it..not sure what its about...eh..shows how much attention i pay to my friends..hmm but its a great poem and has great flow! keep up the good writes.
Becky
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