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Pills in the Bottle

Pills in the bottle
Might as well be a knife at the throat
Rub the skin
Love the raw sensation

Press a little deeper
Surfaces the red liquid
Drains down, coating self
Basting in Death’s wine

Pills in the bottle
(Might as well be a) Knife at the throat
Pills in the bottle
(Might as well be a) Knife at the throat

Pills in the bottle
Rattle out in the hand
Throw the head back
Might as well be a knife at the throat

Swallow a little deeper
Helps them down
Drains down, coating self
Basting in Death’s wine

Pills in the bottle
(Might as well be a) Knife at the throat
Pills in the bottle
(Might as well be a) Knife at the throat

Pills in the bottle
Soundly in the stomach
Head feels light
Might as well be a knife at the throat

Feeling a little deeper
Stumbles body
Drains down, coating self
Basting in Death’s blood

Pills in the bottle
(Might as well be a) Knife at the throat
Pills in the bottle
(Might as well be a) Knife at the throat


Pills in the bottle
Causes sickness
Self is on the floor
Might as well be a knife at the throat

Dying a little deeper
Fades to exist
Drains down, coating self
Basting in Death’s wine

Pills in the bottle
Might as well be a knife
Pills in the bottle
At the throat
Pills in the bottle
Might as well be a knife
Pills in the bottle
At the throat

Author notes

Pretty much what it says.

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  • XxTattered WingsxX
    June 18, 2008

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    Wow, I really don't even know what to say about that. It was well written but a bit too repetitive to me. I know that it has a point, but most songs aren't even that repetitive, unless they're rap songs of course! lol I swear I'm not saying it's bad because its not. It's just something I caught on to. I think you have a wonderful talent for expression. I think you should search a little deeper and see what journey it takes you on. I wish you the very best of luck.