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Perfect Girl/Anomaly

The perfect girl,
The girl that every boy dreams of,
The girl that does everything right,
And can do no wrong.

When something happens,
Shes the one to comfort us,
To help with whatever happened,
Shes always there.

Shes the one,
With everything you've ever imagined in a girl,
The one that never leaves your side,
The one that you'd do anything for,
No matter what it is.

Shes the one that you find perfect,
Even in the things that at first seem a little weird,
Shes the one that you'd want to be with,
For the rest of your life.

Shes the one I can't truly describe,
Shes the one with everything I want,
The only one that I will ever truly love,
But is she real?

Does this girl exist,
This girl of my dreams,
The one I can't stop thinking about,
The only one I've ever truly wanted.

She's an anomaly,
She isn't real,
Or maybe she is,
I'll just have to wait,
To see if she exists.

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  • Ryno
    February 9, 2007
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    I think this good be compared too teenage life and crushes with much ease. Laking a little in the concept department but I did enjoy it quite a full lot. Thanks for entering Prewrites, good luck and best luck to you.
    ~Ryan~

  • Jessicuh
    January 27, 2007
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    very nicely written.