My brother the poet
My brother the poets, actually a really good guy
Even though sometimes he thinks he wants to die
But I understand, sometimes I feel his pain
It’s not uncommon, for people in our family to be insane
Most of the poems he writes are dark and stout
To tell the truth, they sometimes freak me out
Mostly though I’m just proud of him, for writing things down
Instead of killing people, the next time he’s in town
The conclusion to this, well you already know it
I’m talking about Jeb, my brother the poet
Please tell me what you think
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this is exactly what he is!!! lol. i wrote him one also, he's grown to be a really good brother to me, and a wonderful friend!
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This is really good. I know what your talking about his is a great guy. This is also about him.
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2631724
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awwww. brotherly love. I wish my brother loved me *sigh* Its nice you guys are close
Peace
-Dani
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thanks
i dont know if awwww was exactly the response i was going for but i like it. thanks for the feed back. im sure your bro loves ya, sometimes us guys have hard times showing it. lol thats why i have to write the emotions down, cause i dont show them very well.
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Wow!!!
I'm fucking flattered! That left me fucking speechless!
Thank you Jeremiah! That shit was goddamn fucking incredible! And such a fucking compliment! Well written, heartfelt and honest. You did a damn good job expressing just what you felt. Many thanks and kudos to you bro!
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sweetness
thanks alot dude. hearing you liked it made me glad, i almost asked if you wanted me to post it or not, so im glad you liked it. thanks for the compliments, getting good replies from a poet like you is encouraging. thanks bro
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