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Song of Suicide

Somebody shoot me
in the Head
BaNg BaNg BaNg
now I'm DEAD

Slit goes the razor
across my SKIN
dRiP dRiP dRiP
till the END

Tie me a noose
and hang it HIGH
PuLl PuLl PuLl
watch me DIE

Hand me a bottle
pop in a PILL
OnE tWo ThReE
lay me STILL

Author notes

!!!NOT A SUICIDE THOUGHT!!!....it's just a little song I wrote. Don't freak!

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  • unbeliever101
    January 29, 2007

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    Oh LInz...This is beautiful in that dark, depressing way that I love. Sing it for me, hon. I miss the sound of your voice. At Quest End this weekend, I felt so alone. Last time I was there, you were, too. Call me, let's talk. I mean really talk, not awkward chatter about boring routines. Luv always, *A


  • Quetzalcoatl
    January 28, 2007
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    "Where life is more terrible than death, it is then the truest valor to live" -Thomas Browne