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Winter

Ahh, and as the dirt freezes over
the branches look alert.
The field is empty,
but for patches of white.
And the wind hurts.

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  • yellingstreetnut
    February 2, 2007
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    wow sas this is awesome! i realyy liked this ur really good
    -katie!

  • hose30
    January 26, 2007

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    Wow I liked it. It painted a great pic of winter. It was short and sweet. good job.Can you give me feedback on my poem Love of my life.