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Kill Count: 1,000,000

You may not have heard of him

you see him at the brink of death

because he is death

 

Always angry because of his duty

always happy to reap souls

always curious of how the soul acts

always worried he may be identified

 

Raising the scythes

deep into your skin

the scythes glow

you reflection appears

 

As you know

he's a living skeleton

tormented by his own sins

fufulling his quota of souls for today

 

So do you know have many souls

he takes in one day?

 

He takes...millions.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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HIYA

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  • Dragons Lady
    September 30, 2007

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    A great take on the prompt. I love the imaginative way you have captured the imagery with such a smooth flow of words. Well done.

  • Bob Fox
    June 10, 2007

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    well

    sadly he does. But I am mtrying to hang on lol. You paint a not so pretty picture of what is in store for all of us. Very interesting


  • Lj-
    January 27, 2007

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    This is really good. I loved how you chose to use the Reaper in this. Your picture is great.

    Thanks for entering.

    Good luck!


  • MagicaI
    January 26, 2007
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    HIYA (so obbSESSED)

    HIYA