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And if

when this world is over
and im allowed to cry,
will you still be the person
who can look me in the eye?
to hold me when im scared
and wipe away my tears?
To love me unconditonally,
despite my greatest fears?
And if tomorrow never comes
And if the sky is no longer blue,
and if the wind would cease to blow,
could i still come home to you?

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  • eternal-devotion
    August 14, 2007

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    I liked it very much.

    I Liked all of this poem, it's very much my style of poetry. There is nothing awkward about it at least to me. I feel that I could put myself in this place. I feel empathy with this person. and can only hope for the answer is yes. The title makes you feel that there could be anr type of answer. The first line makes a very intense statement. The last line makes you feel the emotions of the poem. nothing awkward about this poem. I personally wouldn't change anything about this poem, it is very well written as it is.


  • darkstinger
    January 28, 2007

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    You know you can always come to me. I will love you for no matter what has happen. But this probably wasn't to me, I just wanted to let you know, that no matterr what I will always love you.