Give me a kiss for tomorrow
for without it,
There is no tomorrow
Author notes
This is the first thing that came to me..Not sure if it fits your contest
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A contest entry
- contemporary haiku by bridgetjanejone.
300 points, ended February 7, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Simple, but very endearing. I appreciate poetry that can so much in so few words. It's a talent I have yet to develop. I tend to ramble and beat topics over the head with line after line of melodrama. Still your poem reminds me what I am shooting for. Good write.
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Hey!
How did I miss your fingers hitting the keyboards again! This was lovely! Volume in few words, penned with eloquence. I believe you fit the contest to a T! My pleasure to read
~Tia
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SOOOOOOOO True
I love this...so true....and to the point....feeling of desperation...I love it...and the pic is awesome....
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Whoa, you simply blossom in this beautiful piece, Nor. such truths wound right down to the bone....for thoe of us who have lost some tomorrows.
Ah, you know so well and express so beautifully.
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*sigh* Truly sweet!
You really touched the romantic in me warmly with such a deep and beautifully way to say "You are my life and I live for your affections". I feel it now in my heart fo my beloved and appreciate the sigh you have given. This is definitly a worthy contender for the contest and if I were judging you would be getting a trophy.
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n_n This made me smile. sometimes I read a poem that is good, but there is one stanza that is just majestic. This whole poem is majestic.
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