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Love u More







To my precious babes,

Please listen when I say,

I’m gonna for sure, love you more,

Every single day.


You’re like a dream come true,

A dream I’ve always dreamt.

And like gods angels up above,

You’re the angel that they’ve sent.


You’re my only love,

The one that I adore.

And like a candy sweet indeed,

You’re the one that I crave for.


We are only human,

We’ve both had made mistakes.

And as for our relationship,

This is one we will not make.


People my talk some shit,

So who do they think they are?

Jealous people, of you and I,

Judging us from afar.


They won’t get in the way,

Of our loving and that’s for sure.

Because what we have is one of a kind,

Our love is divine and pure.


Trusting takes some time,

I know that for a fact.

My love for you is very rare,

Don’t make me regret or take it back.


I’d rather share it with you,

I trust you with my heart.

Promise to me you won’t break it,

And I’ll promise I’ll never depart.


You are apart of my life,

Besides my family and friends.

So whatever you fear, I’ll be right here,

To help to you defend.


Whenever you’re down and out,

And when you shed them tears,

I’ll brush them away, carefully,

Until every tear drop is cleared.


I’m here to make you laugh,

I’m here to watch you smile.

I’m here to enjoy every second of it,

Even if it’s for awhile.


I’ll do my ultimate best,

To go on and treat you right.

If ever I feel like I’m losing you,

You’d better bet, I’d put up a fight.


So babe please keep in mind,

Of all I had to say.

I’m gonna for sure, love you more,

Every second of everyday.





J-U-S-T

R-E-M-E-M-B-E-R

T-H-A-T!







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  • PoeticWindstorms
    November 16, 2007
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    This is awesome from beginning to the end. Well written..

    ~JayE


  • angel-lover
    October 22, 2007
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    wow

    hi tori this is amazing how wonderfully written...
    just beautiful ....

  • Young carrot poetry
    September 8, 2007
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    Woow, I love it, you wrote this with feelings of pure love! Its so beautiful!

    love


  • ShaShay
    January 30, 2007
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    Nicely done

    Much sincerity here. You love in wholes not parts...thats rare anymore. pen on ...


  • JT Sammer
    January 30, 2007
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    Victoria, excellent write! Well done and I encourage you to keep up that attitude. A few grammatical things but you did a good job other then that with the spelling etc. Keep it up can't wait to keep reading. Peace, JT


  • Myjoy gold member
    January 30, 2007
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    Remember what brought you to love and never let it go. Some times it so hard to work through the hard time and to remember to love. It talks so well of how you feel, and how you want to love and be loved.
    Keep up the good work.


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    January 30, 2007
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    You seem to have a fight on your hands and looks like you are ready for that fight..Sometimes things just dont come easy..but worth it at the end. I hope things work out for you. This was a great way of venting and it was a good write.
    Soulful Woman


  • real irish rose
    January 29, 2007
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    Victoria this is beautiful and heartfelt, the love and respect you feel is clear for all to see....just beautiful.
    It's good to see you back hun I've missed our little chats... take care.... julie x


  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    January 29, 2007

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    Such a sweet poem...stand up for love and don't let anyone, turn you against the one that you love!!!!!
    Awesome write!!!!!!!


  • requiempoet gold member
    January 26, 2007

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    awwwwwww!!!! Love. It's a bit sticky for be right now but any one who is getting love right now, Rock on for them!! it's good to have you back Pink Ranger!
    love you forever!

    Rosita

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