You've
opened me
from
deep within
warming
me like the
blazing sun
Now
it's only
You and I,
this moment
in our world
heaven and earth
are one
as are we
bound
together
for
all eternity
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This is breath-taking picture and your words describe it beautifully....Great job
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whoochi
Thank you again for reading and commenting..
Oh...how I wish for my one true love to knock on my door..(lol)
sigh...
God bless, Brenda
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So much power and emotion is held in such a short poem. It was very vivid and beautiful. Excellent write. Thank you for your kind words on my poem.
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zestydreamer
thanks for enjoying this...
I like it too...Sometmes I amaze myself,,(lol)
God bless, Brenda
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Short and very sweet
I always feel better after reading your works. They always leave me with a good feeling. Love you lots Sis, Bubba
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These words are pure enjoyment.
This is soft and pure beauty.
Well penned.
Buddy
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thank you for commenting, it's highly appreciated..God bless, Brenda
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Excellent
Your words are just beautiful
It is a gift you have
Great thought
Rick
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