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You Don't See

You don't see
What you did
Killed me
I'm crying inside
Because of the hurt
You hurt me
And you don't care
You used me
You didn't love me
Like you said
You never loved me
You just saw
That I was an
Easy target
For your own
Pleasure
To use me
Play me
You don't care
What you did
All you care about
Is you got
What you wanted
That's all you
Care about
And you'll
NEVER care about
My soul is crying
And you're too
Stupid to see
AND you don't care
I loved you
And if this
Is what I get
For loving you
Then I'll never
Love again
Because
This is all
I get

You don't see
What it's like
For me to go
Through everyday
With the pain
That you caused
I wear a mask
To hide the pain
Nobody sees
And nobody cares
Especially you
You don't see

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  • StegsGirl
    February 6, 2007

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    Never quit loving... the day that you stop loving you die... without love your heart has no reason to beat... you must always love... this is a great poem and I am sorry that you were hurt by love and I pray that someone somewhere will show you what it really is... I have been hurt myself... read some of my earlier stuff... you will see... then someone... came and showed me love was possible... you must be patient... great write... it is absolutely amazing... keep it up


  • faderman1959
    January 26, 2007

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    Ragan I am sorry to see you got hurt. When you take the risk of loving someone you take the risk of getting hurt. It may not seem worth it but I can tell you when you finally find the right one you will be in heaven. Another thing to remember is that any guy who would just use and girl and treat her like that is scum and someone you are better off without. Don't waste your time even sweating about him. There are alot of other fish in the sea! Forgive me! I just got corny there! Just remember if you respect yourself they will respect you back. If not dump em!


    • Ragan
      January 27, 2007
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      Thanks, Fader, but I give up. I don't care anymore and I'm better off like I am right now.....alone. I don't want to get hurt again so I'm not going to worry about it. That's twice now I got hurt, but the first time I cried for days. Especially because he left me the day after my grandpa's funeral which also happened to be exactly 11 months that we were together.