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How Can I Compete?

I'm not just a trophy,
or a friend, indeed.
I'm more than once thought,
and mostly in need.

My ego is fragile;
I think what I'm told.
I break instead of bend,
crumble instead of fold.

I'm not a strong one, dear,
not nearly what you thought.
I'm just so afraid you'll be
disappointed in what you've got.

'Cause every time you look at me,
I imagine I'm someone different.
(It was obvious in
every message you've sent.)

So tell me, dear,
how can I compete?
All the things I've heard
say it isn't a plausible feat.

Please tell me what you think

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  • illegalfairy
    January 30, 2007

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    this is really good bobbie. i like it. you dont have to compete you better than every one lol jk. good job. your an amazing writer.
    jessi