666- it's the digits of satin
Or so the worlds told you but the media's fakin'
Shakin'
Cuz' they know that they'll be bakin'
They deny the truth hopin' that they're mistaken
See,
Six six six is the number of man-
It's the mark of the beast, a Christian contraband
The truth is in the Word, and the truth be told-
Now here's the prophecy I send you as it unfolds!
You can't buy or sell without the mark,
A registration sytem - curses you to the dark!
Not a spark!
Not a spark of light,
Black as carbon, black as night!
Whoever bares this seal, seals their soul to fate,
Servin' satins minions with extreem overrate!
The ones who serve the Lord, they're the ones you'll berate
The Christians persecuted by presonified hate!
So put this down on your slate!
The ones who stand strong, are the ones who will live-
If they die to mortal self and serve the Christ who gives
The world is gonna die, one third at a time
If you doubt the words I'm sayin'- Revelation 8-9
God is sendin' satin to the pits of hell
Are you on the winnin' side, or the demon hotel?
Author notes
This is in full support of the Bible, in case some people are confused (or didn't read it carefully)
A contest entry
- Song/Lyric Writer's Contest by Acronym.
850 points, ended March 9, 2007, 19 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Rhyme ^^ by burning alive.
550 points, ended April 1, 2007, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dark & Simple by Xxxxxxxxx.
666 points, ended April 17, 2007, 14 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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i myself think x-tainity is the false religion to oppose judaism.
what better way to hide than in plain sight while they are lookin for someone else.
but thats just i, and my atheism (among other things).
killer rhyme and flow.
be back on the 18th to read this again
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awesome
you know what man, the only book of the bible I've read is revelations. there's some messed up shit in there. anyways... good write, and good luck in the contest man!
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Wow a powerful write with an intruiguing concept, and same as Jen, it should be Satan (capitalized as well) and there are a few other spelling and grammar errors, but in all a wonderfully powerful dark write to be certain. Also, all of the numbers should be written out not given as digits, or so is considered 'correct' in poetical standards. Well done dear poet! Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors.
Hetohke'e * 
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i can see why this got the silver trophy... its fantastic. i thought satan was spelt satan not satin...lol
cheers
Jen -
This is truly good even if I disagree on points. I personally have lived in both pastures and find the (un)-christian to be persecuted in NA more than the christian. So much of the laws is church based that christianity impugns its beliefs on all others. Nice flow and rhythm.
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nice i really like it and i don'tsay that often
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Woohoohoo!Yeah!I'm totally lovin this!Ha!Love the Christian rap!
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O SNAP! rap??? am i correct? inspired! the talk of armageddon! tribulation! 7 years period of judgements. I wonder if you have read the left behind series my dear poet? this is wonderful. you illistrated verses of some judgements perfectly all the while keeping a superb rhythmic flow. I'm betting anythin this is a rap.
God is sendin' satin to the pits of hell
Are you on the winnin' side, or the demon hotel?
Haha i had to giggle at the last line it sent such a perfect conclusion to such a dark meaning. it sends a blow straight to your core. awesome ending it was perfect!
~Sorrow~
ps thanks for your comment on my poem Rope's End
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niice! I was actullay putting your poem into a rap sort of style and it flowed very nicely. I especailly like
"The ones who serve the Lord, they're the ones you'll berate
The Christians persecuted by presonified hate!"
well done
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