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missing you

i'm leaving for the navy
i have to leave home
i'm going to miss you baby
feeling all alone

i swear i'm going to miss you
and already i can't wait to be back
your everything i'm fighting for
your love i'm going to miss

just think off all the times
and laughter we have shared
all of the stupid lines
and stupid jokes i've said

through all the fires
accidents and calls
you've waited for me
to come home to you

You've learned to handle it
the dangers of my job
so hun i know
that this news you handle

i'll always be here
and when i come home
this love that i've had
you will see is still there

my heart will be lonely
but i'll know you'll still be there
waiting back at home
to be together again

i love you sweetheart
it's not going to change
everything will still stay true
just wait.... you'll see

my love will be there
though attitude changed
i'll love you always
no matter where i am

so hang in there
stay strong
i'll be home soon
and we'll be together again

i cry to think of it
how much i'm going to miss you
and how much
we will both miss each other

the thought of comming home
this joyous occation
the tears that will be shed
the times that we will spend

just be strong
keep your faith
hang in there
and i'll be in your arms again

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  • -Ink Artist-
    February 9, 2007
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    Awww, so sad that lovers get taken from each other. This is a very emotional piece, joy from the good times, and sadness from the time apart. Wonderfully written! Thanks for your entry and good luck!

    ~Lori