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Evensong

I am enamored,
captivated
by your bel canto.
Exquiste melencholy
notes, delicate and
graceful in
composition.
A virtuoso in
your own right.
Adagissimo, your
dolce voice lulls
my restless
heart to sleep.

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I choose music, singing to be precise!

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  • SeaWithYourHeart
    July 19, 2007

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    wow bloomin fantastic congratulations. loved the rich juicy words and the format. your composition was gracefl like a lullaby and it was just wow good luck:


  • Riftkin gold member
    July 17, 2007

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    okay do not know much beyond english and not even that good, but you did wonderful with one than one language here.


  • Mel-the-Believer
    June 26, 2007

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    Very good. I loved it. Slightly short, but sweet. Wonderfully done. Thank you so much for entering. Good luck. God Bless!