Broken pieces on the floor
She is dead
She will scream no more
Blood drips down
A quiet sound
Like rainwater pouring down
It's a wonderful symphony to his ears
He seduced her with fears
Made her cry blood-soaked tears
And he enjoyed every moment
His weapon of choice?
A few simple words
And a dagger to give up
He loved her
Oh yes, he loved her
In the only way a killer could
He loved her warm blood
And her choking screams
And that look of utter defeat in those glossy eyes
It was esctasy
To see her bleed
So beautiful the spread
He finds it enticing
To see her dead
Smilng down
At the maimed corpse
He finds himself
At a loss
No more fun for him
He can no longer hear
Her glorious screams
Her pleas for salvation
A new victim is needed it seems
As he looks upon the scene
He cleans his blade
Upon her dress
Which used to be white
But now red
How useless
Smirking to himself
He moves out into the streets
Looking for a victim
A dazzling new treat
The night is dark
The moon is done
And pretty soon
Another person will be gone
And as the devil smirks
With his blade of sin
He wonders to himself
Who will be the next person to give in?
A contest entry
- The Darkest Day by Baahltres.
2000 points, ended February 13, 2007, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I liked this one, but the rhyming is a little too forced, but I do like the imagery! Good job otherwise!
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excellent work Loveless. I loved it. I especially loved that despite how dark and sadistic it is the background is a rainbow. lol I also liked the red text that represents the womans blood 5 stars!!! and again excellent work!!!
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i just decided everyone in my contest is going to get 1 applause... so here's yours!
~.~Yvonne~.~
Baahltres
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Awesome hun!
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I like how this has a rainbow background
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Oh, I love this a lot! Dark, sadistic, and pure joy in being evil! *dances around the room, but stops when the realization hits that I'm in the middle of Philosophy class* ahem... Well done!
Thank you for entering and good luck!!!
~.~Yvonne~.~
Baahltres
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