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Take Root And Blossom (a cinquain)

Grow up
Rise tall and smooth
Sprout new leaves and branches
Towering protector of all
Strong tree

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  • deadcolor dreams
    February 18, 2007
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    I like it. Abit simple for my taste, but good job.


  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    January 27, 2007
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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    I like this. It is about nature and it's always a nice change then what we normally see
    I enjoy the way you personify this in relation to a person to start with. It's clever
    Faerie