I am a myriad of colors and lights within.
I close my eyes and experience the wonder that is me.
Flowing, joining, co-mingling,
Birth after Birth, I am born again.
Creation enveloping Creation.
Blooming endlessly from the stuff that is me.
A contest entry
- Prewrite Phenomenon #2 by Ryno.
300 points, ended February 9, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Short, sweet, beautiful. Thanks for your entry.
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lol For some reason this makes me think of bunnies and how they are always having babies!
I know that's not what you meant but that's what it made me picture. It sounds like it's full of wonder and life and the perpetual circle of things. I think that you expressed yourself nicely in this.
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Beautiful piece and thought provoking as well. It was an easy read, short and to the point, Just the kind I like. The circle of life is one of the great miracles and mysteries of life. Great work.
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A circle of life, just as a myriad or kaleidoscope of colors cause things to shift in nature and in color. You describe your ever changing circle very well.
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Sounds like you have a good grip upon who you are and open minded enough to know that one is never finished growing and learning within this thing called life.
Powerfully written
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Thanks again!
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