The Flames are burning here,
But i am ice inside.
I am so filled with fear,
but not allowed to hide.
I need some help now,
but i can never tell.
I'll take it to my death.
My secret won't take breath.
I just want to Feel, and not be numb.
Cuz i am just damn lost
This path is mine so broken up
This is all i have and it's not enough
I am burning but i feel the cold
and i think this is the end of my road
I just want to feel before i go.
Why can't this just be done
Why does it all have to be
i want to soar above in heavens light
but i am damned to enternal night
to roam this earth alone
Love will never be known
I just want to Feel, and not be numb.
Cuz i am just damn lost
This path is mine so broken up
This is all i have and it's not enough
I am burning but i feel the cold
and i think this is the end of my road
I just want to feel before i go.
A contest entry
- Anything Contest by PrettyxoxPoison.
300 points, ended April 10, 2007, 43 entries
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I didn't know you wrote this, i was just searching through the contests-Wow, it's so sad and heart breaking, it makes me want to reach out for you.
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nice poem Cam lovers it with alll my Silky Personality
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Very Good!!!
I think every one feels like this at some point in their life, but it takes someone to write an amazing piece of art like this to put it into perspective and make it understandable. Great Write!!
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i love this, so amazing,i know these feelings all too well. very good and the peice flowed great. keep up the work and i hope to read more
*unchained*
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