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If You Only Knew

If you only knew
How I fall to pieces
Every minute I'm not next to you

If you only knew
How much I miss you
You heart would ache every day

If you only knew
How much I love you
Words aren't enough
And actions won't even come close
To letting you know
How much I love you

Without you
The stars and the moon
Are faint specks of light
The snow isn't as
White as a lamb's flece
Instead its like a waste land

You brought my
Dead soul back to life
You gave me a
Breath of new life
When I started to fall
In love with you

If I could hand you my love,
I would do it in a heart beat
But it doesn't work that way
So all I can do is tell you
And hope to God that
You love me the same...

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  • Mori-lux
    March 5, 2007

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    wow

    this is beautiful. I know how you feel. almost every time I fall in love I doubt that my lover loves me back. It kills.
    good job
    ~mary

  • angelbaby2007
    February 8, 2007
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    gurl that is an awsome poem


  • football-knight
    February 6, 2007
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    Wow

    this is so beautifulll I am at a lose of words right now....


  • She burns
    January 27, 2007
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    Hunny this is just so heartfelt and so touching, how pure your love is, how much you care for him, sunset and sunrise inside you as always, just so beautiful as always like alanna
    This is just so amazing,
    antonio

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