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Love Is A Rose

I sense his mood

by his breathless,

wanting,

captivating stare

he opens me like
a hibernating rose

from the depths of the earth
in the cold hard winter months

observing ,exploring
caressing each petal

one by one

as I bloom to life

love is

discovered by

the

mystery of touch

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It is amazing how we can define love by a rose.....

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  • Shakes-spear
    July 28

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    very nice

    You are a flower and a beautiful one at that. You may have blossomed, but you will again and again in my heart! Love ya Sis, Bubba


  • Endeavor gold member
    February 26, 2007
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  • Whoochi gold member
    January 29, 2007
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    great write....love the title...and its nice how you juxtaposed the 2 things....


    • mypassion
      February 4, 2007
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      whoochi

      thank you so much for reading and giving me such thoughtful
      and kind words..Truly is appreciated..Brenda

      Sorry it took me so long to response..


      God bless, Brenda


  • Endeavor gold member
    January 27, 2007
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    Very Good

    Nice theam behind this writing

    Wonderfull metaphores

    soft words

    Rick

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