They're talking to fast again
I've misunderstood again
She walks out the door again
I cry in my room again
I stare at my walls again
While Mummy prays again
As my thoughts die again
Counselors on the phone again
I look in my draw again
I take out the blade again
My music goes on again
My head is a blur again
I score at my arm again
The silver is returned again
Little sister at the door again
With a first aid certificate again
I ask her to leave agin
I choose a long-sleve again
Knowing they'll see through agian
My Brother's out again
And Dad's watching racing again
Ignoring my pain again
I enter their home again
I wipe my tears again
I say Im OK again
I go to bed again
Then, again.. I cry
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Again again again, over and over.
Poems brilliant
Well done you
Love you princess shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh its a secret


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OOOOOH...I like your poem, again...
I really thought it was well written. The repetition of again just solidified the concept of the poem.
One mistake I did find though was,
"I look in my draw again"
I think you meant drawer?
Anywho, great poem, and I hope things get better for you.
Keep writing!
*snap*



