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A&E Makes House Calls

They're talking to fast again
I've misunderstood again
She walks out the door again
I cry in my room again
I stare at my walls again
While Mummy prays again
As my thoughts die again
Counselors on the phone again
I look in my draw again
I take out the blade again
My music goes on again
My head is a blur again
I score at my arm again
The silver is returned again
Little sister at the door again
With a first aid certificate again
I ask her to leave agin
I choose a long-sleve again
Knowing they'll see through agian
My Brother's out again
And Dad's watching racing again
Ignoring my pain again
I enter their home again
I wipe my tears again
I say Im OK again
I go to bed again
Then, again.. I cry

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  • OnlyTimeWillTell
    January 27, 2007

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    Again again again, over and over.
    Poems brilliant
    Well done you
    Love you princess shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh its a secret


  • Piper77
    January 26, 2007

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    OOOOOH...I like your poem, again...

    I really thought it was well written. The repetition of again just solidified the concept of the poem.

    One mistake I did find though was,

    "I look in my draw again"

    I think you meant drawer?

    Anywho, great poem, and I hope things get better for you.

    Keep writing!

    *snap*