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fragments of nothing



& all thats left of me are tiny fragments of a broken heart
scattered through the stale sex infected air.

& placed apon the lips of him/her

because she said he said they said we said...

does anyone even know anymore.

and i wanted to tell you that night

that nothing was going to be the same from now on

because disasters like this only happen to girls like me

destined for catastrophe

so tell all the words you never meant to say

and maybe we can start this over.

Please tell me what you think

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  • GalBraith
    March 26, 2008
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    Perfectly expresses that emotion. I feel like this, too.


  • Lineave
    February 26, 2008
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    This is so sad. The poem is so beautiful though.


  • PrettyBlueJeans
    June 21, 2007

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    you sound so tired and down. hope things are better with you, I know that they were pretty bad before. well, good luck with everything, and if you post something else, I'll be sure to read it =)


  • devils muse
    May 24, 2007

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    very beautifull....we all want to start over but if we could the things we loved from our past life would be gone...and possibly us as well...


  • sweetpearl
    January 28, 2007

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    I liked the beginning starting with and ... it seems more like thoughts that way.

    "destined for catastrophe"

    --I feel this way too sometimes. There will be lots of things we will wish to start over but it never is what it never was or will be. If that makes ANY sense, I don't know I'm damn tired.

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