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maybe

Just maybe
you wonder
how someone
could love
you and
how that
someone could
hate you
as much

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  • On Frail Wings.
    March 13, 2007
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    awesome!!

    this is a very good poem it is short, direct, and to the point. it's an easy one to understand instead of having to think about what the author meant on every line. but it does give us something to think about. nice job.

    blackrose


  • grannyeri gold member
    February 5, 2007
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    Deep, and kind of sad in a way. Sounds like my granddaughters who can be the best of friends one sec and then hate each other the next. Even friends, especially girls, go through this so often in junior high, causing each other many tears and terrible days. Easy to read and understand.


  • The White Rabbit
    January 29, 2007

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    oh wow how i can relate to this. Its like one mintue (literally) she can talk to me, call me her sister, look at me with respect, and listen to what I have to say, then as soon as I say the slightest thing wrong in her eyes, she tears me down. I mean really, friendship is about always forgiving and ignoring the things that are wrong in the other person, but some people just cannot do that. Its so screwed up. Just love me for me and all my faults. amazing poiem I can really relate.w tih love and giggles, the white rabbit