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I am so full of blah today
no ups and downs no hip horray
Just kinda slithering along
And everything I do is wrong

I think I'll change
I think I'll try
To do my best
Tho God knows why

There's nothing ahead now
There's much behind
As far as what as far as how
I haven't got a thing in mind

I could run away
I could stay and sleep
I could waste the day
In dreariness deep

Instead I'll simply stoke the fire
Of jumbled thoughts of which I tire
Til slumber takes me off in dreams
And nothing's real or so it seems.

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  • On Frail Wings.
    March 13, 2007
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    great job

    i think this is a very good poem it flows nicely.