...It hurts
To Walk
To Breathe
To Sing
To Live This Story
...It hurts
To Sleep
To Work
To Be Without
... You
The Days.
When You Are Not Here
In My Arms
Living This Story
Laying Next To Me
Sharing Ever Moment With Me.
It Hurts.
And This Happy Story
Is Painful
Without You
But..
I Love You So..
So I Hold My Breathe And Count To Ten
Saying Soon Enough, You'll Be In My Arms Baby
And When I Reach Ten...
You Are Here With Me.
Holding Me Close
... Many Times I Counted To Ten
But Still You Were Soon Enough. Here With Me.
Making This Story So Happy.
Author notes
i had to write something, but i didnt want it to be too negative, because i dont feel completely negative.. but it couldnt be estatically happy either.. im happy to be with you my love, and when we are apart for any amount of time, i feel sad without you, like a part of my life is missing. falling. but i know that i have to be strong, for us baby. and that i will see you in time, soon...
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow this was amazing. its so strong.
the short lines make the impact so much harder.
i liek the repeatition of "it hurts" it works, but i cant explain why.
ammazing write
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I can so relate to your poem when my husband has gone to work I about go crazy waiting for him to come home again I miss him so much. Great write Keep up the wonderful writing
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Thankyou so much for your comment. yes it almost kills you doesnt it. sigh. lol, i used to just say im obsessive, lol. but once that special person is there with you for sometime, you enjoy and get used to their presence, and when they are gone, you sit and say whoa, there's something missing here. yes time alone is always good, but i still miss my baby
... dont go crazy hun, lol, i know you can make it through.
.. i have faith in you... well you take care, and thanks so much... 
~Ashley~
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Thankyou so much for your comment. yes it almost kills you doesnt it. sigh. lol, i used to just say im obsessive, lol. but once that special person is there with you for sometime, you enjoy and get used to their presence, and when they are gone, you sit and say whoa, there's something missing here. yes time alone is always good, but i still miss my baby... dont go crazy hun, lol, i know you can make it through. .. i have faith in you... well you take care, and thanks so much... ~Ashley~
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