my heart has stopped
you wonder why
it seems that i am dead inside
its because you left me there
trying to breath in the air
but i couldnt do it
so i stopped
and now
the result you ask
i am dead inside
Please tell me what you think
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I like this, though very sad. You don't need to be dead inside!
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this is a very sad piece, you know you can talk to me about anything anytime....I love you it's a good piece, but cheer up. ttyl
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i was bored tehehe
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Well done
Good job with this poem. I loved how you used the line "i am dead inside"...it was very good. Keep up the work, fellow Aries. I loved this one. -
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aries im not an aries ima pieces or however you spell it
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Ok
Ok, you're a psices...or however it's spelled. Fellow Psices, you write very well.
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This is a wonderful write Amy. You are very talented, and this write of yours expresses much.
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Great work on this, Amy!!! So much pain, but it's still amazing. Great work!!! 
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oh wow. theres such pain in this!
but its brilliant! 
keep up the great writes ino
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