She's just a broken angel who's drowning in her dreams
A lonely,lost girl silencing her screams
Cutting open already scarred flesh
Hoping one time it will be too deep, her death
A scar for everytime she that sharp blade win
She's trying to tame that fatal beast within
Nightmares upon nightmares, dreams not coming true
A foggy film over her wishes, she can't see them through
Sadness consumes, depression just tries to destroy
Happiness a distant memory, there's nothing left to enjoy
Tears they're welling in her shameful eyes
As deep down inside her, her lonely soul does die
But no one cares to notice this girl who's fading way
But they will surly notice when she's gone one of these days
She's just a broken angel who's drowning in her dreams
A lonely lost girl silencing her screams
In a list
A contest entry
- Darkness Does Fall... by Broken Machine.
600 points, ended January 29, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dark and Depressing...Please enter by XHollowXEyesX.
700 points, ended April 6, 2007, 119 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this is a truly amazing write. the emotion and power of this poem is so strong and touching. I can really fell the pain and loneliness of the girl, and can relate to it well.
vrey touching and awesome write.
thanks for entering and goodlcuk -
Powerful, full of emotion. Great write and I love the flow. Wonderful job.
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This poem overflows with sadness. A well expressed emotion makes this poem captivating. Well done dear poet.
Good luck in the contest.
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this is so good
I've never read any of your stuff before and this is immense! I hope to read more in the future.
She's just a broken angel who's drowning in her dreams
A lonely,lost girl silencing her screams
First and last lines are fantastic they realyl start it and finish it perfectly (and lush pic)
hehe i like it beacuse im blown away
good job
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I think this is amazing!!!
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Very nice poem. I can relate. I like your style a lot. Nice flow throughout the entire poem. Great Job.
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Awwww. This is a really good poem! Thanks for entering the contest and good luck!
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