Aim to shoot
Shoot to kill
Everything goes black
The body lies still
Blood leaks
The soul is released
All life drains away
No more woe's for the deceast
They can no longer feel
Feel like all they do is wrong
Resting for eternity
In a place they'll always belong
Ropped by a tight leash
Being pulled down into a ring of fire
But saved by a bright flash
Pulling them higher and higher
A broken soul judged and guided
Greeted by the angels from above
So happy an joyful
Now she'll always be truly loved
In her life
Who would have knew
That she was abused,
Poor torn angel adorned by a halo and golden shoe
Please tell me what you think
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Wow that was good! I liked the last line best. It eneded the poem well. Talk to ya later
-SH09
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this is really great...my favorite verse is 4
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Thanks for the comment, I appreciate it! Glad you liked it!
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its great hon
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Thankies! Glad you liked it!!!!
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