Cast aside for sins you love
For most this walk will bend their soul
For you its freedom to have no light
The darkest realms will make you whole
The end is near be still your grave
No limits there to steal your heart
Guide you through this eternal maze
From this world you now depart
Make them see that this was meant
The darkest realms will hear your cries
A lonely path is what you crave
Your story ends with no goodbyes
Author notes
A realm for which we all have visited, some just stay longer than most
A contest entry
- The Darkest Day by Baahltres.
2000 points, ended February 13, 2007, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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you as well
you demonstrate something that my sister had, (she was a poet too) you write like her...
anyways, your imagery is fantastic and your compliments are greatly appreciated.
of this poem, the line that stays in my mind is
"The darkest realms will make you whole"
it is so true, because its kinda like...you must experience all parts of life, from different perspectives to ever truely be happy or complete
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i just decided everyone in my contest is going to get 1 applause... so here's yours!
~.~Yvonne~.~
Baahltres
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Dark Indeed
This was very dark. So I love it! I have been in this realm. And must say you have a wonderful bearing on this path less traveled and journey not all can handle. So I say, Bravo!
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This is a great poem, and I can see the point in darkness being liberating because in a way it is... although I will not get into that now. Umm... my favorite line was, "The darkest realms will make you whole" That's definitelly a great line! Well done!
Thank you for entering and good luck!!!
~.~Yvonne~.~
Baahltres -
i really like it and i think my favorite line would be...Cast aside for sins you love
For most this walk will bend their soul
that part is my favorite i dunno it just made sense
great write...tty
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