Your lies just humor me, serouisly.
I don't even want to deal with you.
Honey you really try to act all big.
BUT YOU'RE NOT EVEN CLOSE TO THAT.
Nothing but two-faced converstations.
Nothing but the hypocritical gossip.
You make me completly nauseous inside.
REALLY, LEARN TO STOP BEING IMMATURE.
Everyone around us can see it.
You no longer have any friends.
LOOK WHAT YOU DID TO MY LIFE.
And you called me your best friend.
JUST STOP TELLING ME HOW YOU'RE SO COOL.
Not one person belives your lies anymore.
So why don't you do us all a big favor.
Take your dress off and leave the fucking party.
Author notes
Yea. my title is from a quote I saw..and I was just inspired.
My ex best friend...is such a liar.
She talks about all these guys that "want" her WHEN THEY DON'T.
She says how "cool" she is WHEN SHE'S NOT.
it's annoying...really.
Please tell me what you think
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every one knows one of these. lucky it was an exfriend and not family. you are stuck forever.smile. very good.
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Sounds like just whawt goes on in some circles - girls who think they are so cool, yet are far from it. Think they live in a make believe world where they are popular and with it, when really they are lost, alone and lonely. Sentiments well expressed in these lines.
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again, you have written rough, stylish poetry
your first stanza through the third are each about one person, but they also are about three different ideas and are combined as a theme... she is a diletante (sp), she is an unworthy friend, not a friend anymore, she is a day tripper and a night super plastic lover bitch, .... she is sad and lonely now, perhaps. she is totally annoying.
you get the style in your poems instinctivly from certain influences which are quite cool. lyrics of music, snippets from around this site from poets who write edgy stuff and your own real clear observations.
gotta make you a fav. no gettin' around it. ,,,Danni
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Brutally honest!!!!
I laughed when I read this! People are so fucking petty and two-faced. I met some real posers and wankers! I don't really care about the spelling miscues. The lyrics are hella funny! Hilarious
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Petty high school drama...hopefully it gets better for you or she just grows up and learns the horrible truth!!
Best of luck to you
Rosita -
If I might make one suggestion off the bat - try to run it through the spellchecker before you hit submit. There's a few little mistakes here and there that don't detract overly from the piece, but could easily be fixed.
Other than that, I like the passion that's in these words, a lesson that I wish more people had learned back when I was your age... -
wow i totally get what you mean. hypocrytcal. lying and you actually fall for all their bullshit? mmmhhmmm it sucks but its sweet as being 'free' if u no wat i mean lol nice write i love how you used capitals to emphasise. well done!
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