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The Untrod Way

A lost and lonely soul
Traveling a winding path
Uncertain where it leads
Too afraid to turn back

So many places along the path
But none that look inviting
Looking for a place to rest
But none come into view

I long for just one moment
Of peace and relaxation
I find a narrow alley
Leading off my beaten path

Dare I follow where it leads
Do I want to know what's there
Curiousity tugs at me
Urging my feet toward the unknown

I slowly start this narrow way
Looking all around me
I hear strange sounds and see strange sights
And I'm too fascinated to be scared

A whole new world has opened up
On this unforged path
No one else has gone before
And I'm so glad I did

Author notes

I've been going through a lot of life changes recently, and made some drastic moves I didn't necessarily give a lot of thought to. Most have turned out well and inspired this poem. Hopefully, it's as good as I think it is.

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  • RedAquarius gold member
    January 26, 2007

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    Reminds me of Frost's "paths less travelled" - I always try to take the one less travelled, although sometimes I chicken out!