I stand before you
My heart naked to your eyes
With pride long gone
I wait for your reply
I don't know what else to do
I've told you how I feel
Our fate is up to you
Do you believe it's real
My soul has longed for years
To be joined as one with yours
How can I relieve your fears
If you won't tell me they exist
There's nothing left to do I guess
But wait on pins and needles
I've done my very, very best
The rest depends on you
Do you dare to take the chance
To walk the path, not knowing where it leads
I'm asking you to share this dance
And spend your life with me
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I'm not real thrilled with the ending, but I don't know...maybe it will grow on me. Any opinions?
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I think the ending is ok myself, maybe a bit much on "dance the dance" hrm....share the dance perhaps? oh bu then you have share below...what if you changed that share to spend?
Anyway I think it's ok
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