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To Be Like Me

I cry myself to sleep
Just to find in my dreams
More hurt and despair
Left so unaware
Always left to blame
I wish I could be the same
As the ones that shine
And ditch the pain I find

Bridge
This is the life
That I would rather take away
This is the life
That does not fade away

Chorus
To feel the razors
To see the blood
To feel the rain
To bathe in the flood
To battle the world
To feel its pain
To be knocked down
To have nothing to gain
You have no idea
How to be like me

I feel pain pour down
As I fall to the ground
Shedding every single tear
Basking in every fear
As the shadows loom
Making my own doom
Feel like my pleasure
I don’t know my own measure

Repeat Bridge
This is the life
That I would rather take away
This is the life
That does not fade away

Repeat Chorus
To feel the razors
To see the blood
To feel the rain
To bathe in the flood
To battle the world
To feel its pain
To be knocked down
To have nothing to gain
You have no idea
How to be like me

I cannot see clear
The pain is so drear
You will not know
The pain that doesn’t show
You don’t want this life
It’s full of fearful strife
Stuck in the pit
Full of endless s***

Repeat Chorus
To feel the razors
To see the blood
To feel the rain
To bathe in the flood
To battle the world
To feel its pain
To be knocked down
To have nothing to gain
You have no idea
How to be like me

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  • secret pain
    April 1, 2008
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    AMAZAZING!!


  • Angel Full Of Hurt
    December 16, 2007
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    A real cool song

    I remember this song..when can I hear the tune?

  • Angel Full Of Hurt
    October 30, 2007

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    Oh wow ROCKING song!

    the chorus is like NO OTHER


    Repeat Chorus
    To feel the razors
    To see the blood
    To feel the rain
    To bathe in the flood
    To battle the world
    To feel its pain
    To be knocked down
    To have nothing to gain
    You have no idea
    How to be like me

    I would like to hear this part of the song and...

    I feel pain pour down
    As I fall to the ground
    Shedding every single tear
    Basking in every fear
    As the shadows loom
    Making my own doom
    Feel like my pleasure
    I don’t know my own measure

    this part of this song THUNDERS!
    yes shakes up allpoetry, your song..
    giving the floor a breaking...
    this song is cool!

  • xXBroken-SoulXx
    April 26, 2007

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    Sweet

    this is nicely done i like it alot im gonna be composing music in the next few weeks these are the type of lyrics i need

  • Beautiful Spirit
    April 6, 2007
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    LOVE IT!


  • The Ravens Shadow
    March 16, 2007
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    Awsome

    I think think the emotion really comes through in this and even a visualization of the story in this song I would most definetly listen to this if it was ever played over the radio ............ great job Keep them comin

    Shadow P


  • Scandalous Beauty
    January 26, 2007

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    Wow Matt!

    I like it. You expressed very clearly how deep the pain and dispare is. I have felt this way in the past. It flowed perfectly. Great job.

    Guin


  • dragonzbloodxgirl
    January 26, 2007
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    gooooood...matt....gooooodd


  • BekkBekk
    January 25, 2007
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    You should do this professionally. Seriously...you really should.

    -BxBxBx


  • Emokitty23
    January 25, 2007
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    hi mattew

    I it matt

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