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You[[we]]HangLikeADisease

          iToss&&Turn
                [becauseyouaremyfever]

    We Go
          Hot,Hot,Cold,Hot
                  [&&ThereIsNothingICanDoExcept:]


S  W  A  L  L  O  W

          the pills

The doctor makes me take.

&&Hope[ItIsJustTheFlu]         

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..writing late at night again.

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  • makeout kid
    January 29, 2007
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    [becauseyouaremyfever]

    love that


    • ohemeegeeay
      January 31, 2007
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      I Loveyarr, sweets. Thanks for the comment.

      Noise&&Kisses


  • Ohlympia
    January 25, 2007
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    Ha...this is me all.the.time. Fun. && totally realistic

    ♥♥[ms.oblivion]


  • sweetpearl
    January 25, 2007

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    I love this line:

    "becauseyouaremyfever"

    --it's a good way of putting it. And wrapping it at the end was done well. Short but effective.

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