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So stop


So stop the lies around me
So stop the hurt inside
Why do things seem so complicated
I just want to run and hide.

So stop the stupid arguements
Just give me the truth for once
I'm so fed up of feeling used
I'm just like a little girl, lost.

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had to be done. couldnt hold it in any longer.

meh.

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  • Dark-Love-of-Death
    November 3, 2007

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    i understand that really well... its close to being tired of everything around u n u just want to find u'rself... not wanting to be some one elses fool


  • Thoughtful Seeker
    March 13, 2007

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    Great job!!

    I understand this write perfectly. Life gets so ridiculous sometimes. I know how insensitive and cruel people can be, but hang in there. Life won't always be this way, it just seems like it. Just remember that if life wasn't a little complicated or frustrating, it would probably be pretty boring. I get fed up with feeling like people take and take, and never give a thing but that's how it goes. You are obviously a nice person, and those are the people that get taken advantage of the most. It's a shame, but I know it's true. It stinks, but don't let it get you down. Just know that you are a better person like that, and say to hell with them. Keep on writing, you are really talented, and I enjoy what you have to say because it is so true. ~Jani~


  • Abdul T Alishtari
    January 30, 2007

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    I know this feeling

    I want to stop
    also what causes pain
    as I inelegantly flop
    making more bigger stains.

    Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari