Some days I feel like superman,
With an “S” upon my chest.
The weight of the planet is oh! so heavy,
constanly feel'n I've done my best.
Caring deeply about this great world,
Never understanding continuous turmoil;
I don’t have super powers and no I can fly,
But I will fight for you until I die.
A contest entry
- the best you can do! (for our none acomplished writers) by honey bear.
550 points, ended March 4, 2007, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is a good write, all we can do in this life is our best although some expect more from us than we are able to give.. good luck in the contest my friend and thank you for entering
oops
spell error...(constantly) and i think you meant to say...and no i can't fly..
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i like the first two lines..
Some days I feel like superman,
With an “S” upon my chest.
this was awesome, and some days we all feel like we're invincible... but sadly.. we arent
great work my new poet friend!
love dani
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Well as long as you do your best what more could we ask for?
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