I only have to look into your eyes
To see the love that hides behind the man.
How can you stay behind your ugly lies?
It's widely thought that you don't give a damn.
But my heart says something that's not the same.
I know that you are just as scared as me,
And try to hide your feelings in a game;
Your weaknessness no one will ever see.
I want to help your love shine through the gloom,
Unleash the raidiant beams that are chained.
To prove our love will not end up in doom,
To prove our love is worth all of the pain.
Don't make a promise you don't think is wise,
It only leads to a lovely demise.
Please tell me what you think
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thanks. i needed that spell check
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Spelling?
Hey, Great write. I think you may want to check the spelling of the title, Im assuming you wanted it to be called "Lovely Demise".
Anyways, great job on this one, it has alot of feeling.
---Grey
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