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Tears of petals

Darkness comes thous way.
You do not stay.

You must stay with your people and help them through this
peril of blackness.

Your one and only has went to the side.
The dark side.

Thou's tears are turning from clear to black.

Hopeless you think but thou is wrong.

The light will save you. You welcome it

with open arms.


Darkness is gone for the light has come.

Your tears turn back to clear but then now they are gold.

Love you may not have but  you have a new life to begin

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The war kept going until the very end

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  • EatYourSunlight
    January 25, 2007

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    oh...wow..this gives ME alot of hope. i like your style and how you made it kinda like old times. its soo..hopefull not hopeLESS. which is good. like very uber uber good. love it
    xoxox pweace