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Waiting For You

Waiting for You

The door is open, but the birds squawk away the daylight,
The shadows grow longer – must I forget?
Your photograph still lives on the mantelpiece, but as light fades
So does your face.
Outside, stirring shadows are but birds',
And yet, when I sleep, a candle will take my place,
It too burning itself down,
Waiting for you.

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  • bebacksoon
    January 25, 2007
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    welcome to AP. this is a fine poem indeed. You have talent. I hope you make many friends here.


    • nish81
      January 25, 2007
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      Thanks!

      Thanks! My first impression is that I love the way I can just set up an account and get started so quickly.