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It's fun to be Real

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It's fun to be real
and see the possibilities multiply exponentially

it's fun to be real
and have all the opportunities at your fingertips

it's fun to be real
and see the true order of the neural pathways unfold

it's fun to be real
and have an infinite supply of irony available for pleasure

it's fun to be real
and learn of the true importance of insignificant things

it's fun to be real
and learn the secrets of the universal reality

it's fun to be real
and know the difference between what is and what is a sideshow

it's fun to be real
and question yourself every second of every day

it's fun to be real
even though it is almost impossible to share in any way

it's fun to be real
and challenged, and challenged, and challenged, and challenged,

it's fun to be real
OK, it's not always THAT fun, but I have seen the alternative!!!!!

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  • cheaphotelsign
    May 26, 2007

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    this needs to be on a tee shirt or something. LOVE this. 'it's fun to be real
    and see the true order of the neural pathways unfold', this is my favorite line. the whole thing is spectacular. i love poems about the self. being real is a trait that is hard to find nowadays. i try to be real as much as i possibly can, but like you said, it ain't always fun. and the alternative sucks. well done! freakin great! no shock to me.

  • Lullabyhaven
    February 18, 2007
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    Sympatico

    I must agree totally with this poem from every angle.


  • Trixie08
    January 25, 2007

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    You've Outdone Yourself!

    This is the PerVirtuous we've all come to know and love. LOL!!! You are just so full of wisdom and it's just a great philosophy I loved it!!!


  • Matthew OMeara
    January 25, 2007

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    It was amusing, definetely, fun even! The repetition of the "it's fun to be real" line, as would and usually does happen with most poems that repeat lines as such, got somewhat boring and old after the first few repetitions. Nevertheless, the subsequent lines underneath were interesting, made for a decent read. Well done, PerVirtuous!