So many answers
lead to another question
a never ending session.
So many questions
answered with imagination
let us live within frustration.
What's the difference
between never ending quests
and just living with our best?
Author notes
Great subject for a contest!
A contest entry
- the age old questions by Elvenfairy.
380 points, ended January 26, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Hmm... I liked the lines and the idea of it all, but the choppy lines made me a little bit frustrated reading this over. Perhaps you could add some longer lines to mix it up a little? Just my opinion, if that's what you were striving for keep it as it is
Evinde -
A very nice train of thought you displayed through this poem. I especially enjoy how it was short, simple, and to the point. No bull crap here. (Perhaps something I need to work on) It made me think as well, which is always nice. Why strive to question when your answers will only cause more questions. And why cant people be happy when they're being all they can be....Good thoughts. Good lesson.
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Failed.
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i agre, this is a very nice read. Overall very wittly written and so concise and very intelligent with your expressions for thought. I have always loved the beauty in simplicities such as poems like these.
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this was a nice poem. It certainly had a bit of wisdome in it. Thanks for enetring my conetst
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it was more like...somewhat motivational a lil more then it was funny...but i liked it
good luck
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